“荼蘼花” Personal Review

我做的好的:
Warm Feedback

  • 作品可以在保证数量【story+10张A3手绘】保证质量【每一张我都特别喜欢!表达了我想要表达的】
  • The quantity of the works can be guaranteed [Story written+10 A3 hand-painted pieces] and the quality can be guaranteed as well[I like every piece in my book very much! I think I did express the idea through my theme]
  • 从上个项目「红色雨」中收到的Feedback在这个项目中改正了【综合材料+逻辑故事性】
  • The Feedback received from the last project “Red Rain” has been corrected in this project [comprehensive material + logical story].
  • 在调查和实验的过程中意识到我所喜爱的「色调」「氛围感」「个人风格」
  • In the process of investigation and experiment, I realized the “color”, “atmosphere” and “personal style” is the elements that I like to use in my creation.
  • 学习到了新的材料运用【立体书!】
  • Learn to use new materials during my creation and experiment [pop-up books!]
  • 比起以往,做的实验非常多,且比较完整,有统一的主题→综合材料插画
  • Compared with the projects before, I did more experiments in this project and relatively integrated, with a unified theme – comprehensive material illustration.

我可以做的更好的
Cold Feedback

  • 或许可以做更多调查,不仅仅是一个主题
  • Maybe more research can be done, not just on one topic
  • 可以更好的安排我的创作时间
  • I can arrange my creation time better.

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