About the HA artifact，I would like to introduce my PSYC2001’s second dragon ball—– meditation.
Introduction：
ARGUMENT A
In my dragon ball, I have clear logic and main idea—- meditation makes my body and brain have better connections, and I have a deeper understanding of this world.
ARGUMENT B
In fact, in the beginning, I wanted to meditate for another purpose, because I thought that some psychological materials said meditation was very magical. Then I thought it was very unscientific. I thought they were exaggerating the facts. Then I wanted to experience it myself and break their point of view.
EVIDENCE A
The most evidence I found is from our class material(武志红的心理学课）, and from Chuck’s class. I also find some professional knowledge of meditation from meditation App. My example is all from some important time during I take meditation, like when I feel I get something different than before, then I will take deeper research of this feeling and make it be my example if dragon ball.
EVIDENCE B
I use different meditation App during I take meditation, and I found different Apps have some different understandings. Different meditation apps’ courses and feelings are also different Then I will summarize from these Apps, and I will add some personal understanding into the summary.
ORGANIZATION
I think I have clear logic and structure because when I write this dragon ball， I have two main ideas. The first one is meditation makes my body and brain have a stronger connection, and the other one is I have a stronger connection with this world. The structure of my article is that I use two paragraphs to show my two main ideas, and make summarize in my conclusion.
LANGUAGE USE
I think I use the language to express my feeling. There are two rhetorical devices in my dragon ball (metaphor and exaggeration) to express my feeling. Though I use much colloquial stuff, I still follow the rubric and use professional evidence to support my idea that can fit Chuck’srequirements and expectations. I also use Grammarly to correlation some mistakes in my article.
CITES SOURCES
Because every example I give will correspond to my feelings in the following article, and then the examples are more a guarantee for my feelings, supporting a state of my feelings, and then I do not use evidence casually in the article.
Reflection:
In fact, I think I am very fruitful in this dragon ball. Before we can begin to write our final meditation summary, we need to complete more than 21 days of meditation practice before we can make a summary. This was my first experience with meditation, and I experienced a lot of things in meditation that I hadn’t experienced before, and it was fun. But When I started writing a summary of my feelings, I was depressed about how to incorporate a lot of feelings and discoveries into an article, and then incorporate those feelings during meditation. I think I have made great progress in information sorting during this dragon ball. Then there is the degree of mastery of a knowledge and information sorting. I correspond relevant knowledge points for my feelings as evidence to support my argument. Then there is the planning of an article structure, the improvement of logic and coherence. I used to rarely write about some feelings, so I think this is a big breakthrough in Writing Communication according to competency. We checked Rubric here and its Skill Strands here and there to see if we meet the criteria and what we need to improve. During the writing period, I will go to different places to collect information, so that I can achieve the diversity of evidence, so as to make up for the limitations of individual materials. In terms of organization, I highlight my main idea in each paragraph and use some techniques to make the transition between paragraphs, so as to make the article clear and coherent.
In the future, I think I will do some improvement in the evaluation or background information perspective. Because Now I put all this information in that place, without a good explanation, it becomes a more independent part. Then practice more, and get level 4 degree to every writing work.
